Teacher analysis of music video

Today Tom and I had Ms. Davies look at our finished music video. She was very happy with it apart from one thing. The only part of the music video that needed fixing was the lettering for the track and artist name at the beginning of the music video which Tom and I had turned green which is not something commonly done in music videos. We also had to remove our names from the music video because it was not a common music video convention to have the producers names on the music video except as a company. We also had to put the words closer together, and put the words on the lower left corner instead of the lower right corner. This combined with the rest of the music video gives us a good product which I hope will get high marks. Though I have to note that in spots the timing of our music video is patchy and somewhat random. Though this can be explained through saying that this helps to represent the state of mind of our main character.