We had some really good comments, and criticisms for the initial edited version of our music video. Some of the good comments were that the narrative and editing we had done so far was good. The audience that watched our video also said that they didn't really understand what was happening in the narrative or story of our video until it ended which is an effect we wanted to achieve because of the ambiguous concept we used for our music video. As for the criticisms we were told that in some places the clips we used were way too long whilst in others our clips are too brightly lit. We can use this to our advantage by saying the brightness in some places represents the improving state of mind of our music video's main character.
For improvements we were told to add more transitions to our music video to further show the full circle narrative style we used. Once we finish with the editing we shall show our video to an audience and get their final opinion. Although I believe that there is nothing more that can be done to improve our music video others may feel differently.
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